Cinematography practical Learner Response

Teacher Feedback

  •  Love the soundtrack and overalll a great creative approach. The use of narrative makes the video really engaging for the audience.
  • Very nice range of shots and camera movement-In particular the OTS and POV shots. Great framing!
  • A few shots incorrectly labelled (e.g. mid shot) Would be EBI but lots to credit here 
Student Feedback
  • Good narrative but need more camera shots
  • I like the background music and he used a range of shots
  • Music worked well but it was hard to understand what was going on at the end
  • Different shots used well
  • The camera should focus on some of the shots
  • Not enough camera movement
  • Shaky camera movements 
  • Some shots were hard to recognise
WWW: I think the music hints to the audience where the plot is going while also making it a bit more engaging for the audience as the video progresses with it. Had a decent amount of shots that were mostly used correctly. The narrative seemed to be creative.
EBI: I need to make sure the camera is steady when doing shots like the panning or tilt (Could also retake these shots so I can compare them and see what works best) and involve dialogue to make the narrative a little less confusing for the audience to make it a bit more transparent in which direction the story is going.


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